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Literature Text
02/17/08
It's not about the stars,
Or the beautiful things painting memories.
It's raining diamonds,
Scattering, swimming hopes dancing in an ocean of blue.
Everyone who has seen the sky has looked at the constellations.
But not many,
I think,
Shares what we two alone believe.
And even fewer,
I know you know,
Could look at the timeless hour glass in the evening sky,
And know in heart and mind that the other does the same.
It's not about the stars,
Or the beautiful things painting memories.
It's raining diamonds,
Scattering, swimming hopes dancing in an ocean of blue.
Everyone who has seen the sky has looked at the constellations.
But not many,
I think,
Shares what we two alone believe.
And even fewer,
I know you know,
Could look at the timeless hour glass in the evening sky,
And know in heart and mind that the other does the same.
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-"Shares what we": I think this should be "share" since the subject to this verb is "many".
This was a lovely piece! The title definitely pulled me in but you delivered quite well.
Thanks for sharing your work!
This was a lovely piece! The title definitely pulled me in but you delivered quite well.
Thanks for sharing your work!