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Things Don't Change by *LaTul1pe:iconLaTul1pe:



01/11/08
I have been cold, cruel, heartless even be,
In this world of strangers you and I have been.
I have touched you, drowned you, over and over again in love,
So many times that even my hands have lost their feelings of touch.
I was leading you on,
Did you ever know?

I saw the love in your eyes,
Heard the pain in your whimpers,
When I bid you goodbye...
I could see that you wanted to cry,
So hard, that unbelievably,
Your grief masked the tears...

So I hold only the smallest strand of hope,
As I write these words of my heart,
That somehow, you would know I have realized,
And understand, that no,
Things-don't-change.
But like what has caused your grief that I now regret,
Like a griding stone against my now caring heart,
That sometimes, it is only our perspectives that transform,
Like a broken wish when the clock strikes midnight.
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A poem inspired by poem "A Clean Cut" [link] by

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~AellaWind
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That was very powerful. Good job.

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Hope requires the contender
Who sees no virtue in surrender.
From the cradle to the bier,
The heart must persevere.
so pretty!

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The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on.
:giggle:
As are your compliments :) Thank you!
you're welcome

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The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on.
:giggle:
i agree with Fallen-Deeply-757, this poem is extremely powerful.
nice job.


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Sin from thy lips? O trespass sweetly urged!
Give me my sin again. -- Romeo & Juliet
=)

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The man who smiles when things go wrong has thought of someone to blame it on.
:giggle:
Thank you goddess :) ;)
Awesome!

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be positive or the woodland creatures could get you!

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