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Tell Me A Story
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08/14/09
Tell me a story about love,
Like how you write them with your lips,
Paint them with your hands,
And never missing a heartbeat of a smile.
Tell me a story with that smile,
Like how I always believe it's something more than feelings,
Something more than lies,
And when it comes to you...it may just be true.
Tell me a story about love,
Like how you write them with your lips,
Paint them with your hands,
And never missing a heartbeat of a smile.
Tell me a story with that smile,
Like how I always believe it's something more than feelings,
Something more than lies,
And when it comes to you...it may just be true.
Image Contribution by:
*TikiLlanes
Image "Since Then...." by *TikiLlanes [link]
Inspiration:
"Rapture" [link] by:
~AngelGrewBlackWings
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I like this very much. It gives a feeling of questioning. You question if this person the narrator is talking about really loves them. It springs up curiosity. It is short, but marvelously filled up with imagery.
The idea of "writing love with your lips" and "painting love with your hands" just brings about such beautiful images in my mind. It is elegantly written. I just cannot say anything bad about this poem. It is so well written and the picture just adds another nice touch.
I hope my interpretation isn't off, but despite that possibility it is such a marvelously written poem!