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10/22/08
You are an optimist.
Maybe too optimistic.
But I need that on days when I am down,
When I need just that sweet voice of yours to brighten my day.
I am an optimist too, like you.
And on a beautiful weekend like this,
I know I could lay cuddling with you all day and night,
And there would be nothing more worthwhile in this world I would miss.
:)
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DarkAngel-Z88 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
This is your down poem? Well it's still lovely, of course, but there is nothing hopeless or anything like that. It's an optimistic poem about being down. LOL. I'm glad that you do have your down days, but not in a mean way. I was just beginning to think you were some sort of Superman! It made me feel REALLY pessimistic though I have my sunshine and rainbow days like I hope everyone else does.
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
*smiles* yeah, we all have our down days...now I'm having more of those than others, but then, every day is a day we can try to bounce back
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EvynC Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009
very bright and cheerful
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009
*smiles* Most of my poems are meant to write that part about love
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EvynC Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
I like that part of love
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
*laughs* good :)
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KissyFishy Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
This poem just makes me so happy everytime i read it.
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
*smiles* :) Good. Keep reading it
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BurningxStarlight Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2008
hahaha. optimists are always more enjoyable than pessimists.
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2008
*smiles* I agree, completely. :)
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thats really really beautiful and true :hug:
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
*grins* :hug:
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sweetheart86 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
wow, it's so sweet and heartfelt. i really like the last line
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
I'm happy you like the poem :)
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Mandalore13 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
You push me to see things I don't see, and love life that much more because of it.

-Mandalore
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
Good. :)
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IvySpring Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
I enjoyed reading the last line. Very sweet. I love it.
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
Good. :)
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Usagi-chan94 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
lovely...if only i had someone...
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
:glomp:
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Usagi-chan94 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
^_^ :icongwomp:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I know how that feels
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
*smiles* :)
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