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11/30/07
"I have something to tell you when I see you."
Is all I managed a thousand miles from home.
A home of my heart,
Encased by love.

I couldn't wait to see you,
To tell you the secret we both know.
As indescribable as time,
Fenced by only the speed of this traveling train.
I knew it before you called me:
“I’m going to meet you half way home.”
And unknowingly to both of us,
They were the last words I heard from your mouth.

Never have I felt so guilty, culpable,
For betraying my own heart with time.
When I just wished that if only I had that chance to tell you,
That simple something from a thousand miles away.

I would have only needed to say that
“I love you.”
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tmpst24myst Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Student Writer
Beautifully somber. :heart:
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
*sighs*...but what is beauty, when there's no one to be with to enjoy it together with?
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faeriecrone Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2008
This is very good.
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LaTul1pe Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2008
Thank you :)
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despairinspired Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
That is quite beautiful. But I'm still quite bemused as to why you put this poem in full as a comment on my poem... [link]
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hayner-l0ver Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2007
awwwwwwww
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